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A movie i made to pratice rigging and animation skills.
Turned out quite well, so i decided to put some more work into it.
Im posting the first render here so i can get some more pointers on what to improve!
Turned out quite well, so i decided to put some more work into it.
Im posting the first render here so i can get some more pointers on what to improve!
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720x576px 2.3 MB
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VERY interesting and eerie look to this.
My only comments would be -when he first stops and looks at the flower, it seems like a long time not to do anything . Perhaps have him doing some deep breathing, after all that running, so you would have some up and down movement in the shoulders and maybe the mouth. then again sounds effects and music may just fillinthis time nicley. A circular turn around the 2 characters druinghtis moment would be awesome but maybe I'm over doing my comment on this little point in the film.
main comment though. when the big guy antics to scream(blow) on the flower I would reverse his mouth position so when he inhales he would have a wide open mouth and when he blows you should have a more closed mouth with lips forward. It would be more like a natural blowing antic and action.
My only comments would be -when he first stops and looks at the flower, it seems like a long time not to do anything . Perhaps have him doing some deep breathing, after all that running, so you would have some up and down movement in the shoulders and maybe the mouth. then again sounds effects and music may just fillinthis time nicley. A circular turn around the 2 characters druinghtis moment would be awesome but maybe I'm over doing my comment on this little point in the film.
main comment though. when the big guy antics to scream(blow) on the flower I would reverse his mouth position so when he inhales he would have a wide open mouth and when he blows you should have a more closed mouth with lips forward. It would be more like a natural blowing antic and action.